
Poetry by Ariel Duncan
What do you do
when something drops
and there’s blood inside?
For my little brother
I wish anything but this
except fear of dropping
the shell in with the egg
cooking it with the rest
and eating breakfast.
We have always been
tender-hearted
my mother said,
squirming in pain as
a specimen of ‘possum
slowed the rip roar
of a Ford station wagon.
We lacked her scientific
demeanor, we did.
Instead, for breakfast
I would fix him
persimmon, taunt with flavor
enough to drive the Israelites out
of Egypt
and back again
so the old people who left
and the old people who stayed
can laugh and tell stories of exile
on the porches where they were children.
About the Poet
Ariel is trained as a historian of science and works as a user researcher. This is the first poem she has ever shared with anyone, besides the one she wrote for her wonderful Latin teacher in 7th grade. She loves best the poetry of Yehuda Amichai, Abba Kovner and Anne Sexton
A beautiful poem with great depth.
Thanks for this wonderful poem and poet.
What poetry should “feel” like. Keep writing, you have light on the tip of your pen.
Beautifully done Ariel!
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Really enjoyed this, Ariel–well done
Wonderful poetry 😊
You should share more.
Lovely!
superb, bravo!