*EDITOR’S CHOICE AWARD: Bringing my favorite previously published poems back to the front page*
Submitted by Peter Frankis
About the Poet
Peter Frankis is an Australian writer, living in the industrial town of Port Kembla south of Sydney. He has returned to writing after a hiatus of a few years. His recent poems have appeared Wild (Ginninderra Press) and online in Plumwood Mountain Journal and Vita Brevis.
Vita Brevis Press. 
Great read.
wonderful
Wow! The stark reality of this pushes deep into my mind. Beautifully crafted. Excellent choice Brian.
I remember this one–it is superb. Those ending lines are wonderful.
Good poem. There is a precipice in it! I’m falling….
The formatting in this poem is perfect for the subject. I feel like I’m in the spaces.